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In her eyes, I see what I have become.
Through her tears, I see what was.
By her shaking voice, I see what will be.
Her hand shows me what could be.
In my eyes, he sees what I see.
Through my tears, he remembers what I remember
By my broken voice, he imagines what I imagine.
With my hand, I try to tell him, I still need him.
- by iluvpolkadots |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/22/2008 |
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- Title: Through my eyes
- Artist: iluvpolkadots
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Description:
I wrote this while I was thinking about Twilight. I had been wondering what it would have been like to have a boyfriend who was always..angry. Like a warewolve..or something. *cough* *cough* vampire..
The first but is from 'his' point of view. Second is from 'mine'. - Date: 11/22/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- faux_fur_rabbit - 07/02/2009
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I don't see why everyone's saying that Twilight sucks just because it's not the same as everything else about vampires and other sh** like that. D=
Anyhow, love your poem, 5/5. Read mine? - Report As Spam
- iluvpolkadots - 01/09/2009
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I think he's a hater. XD Doesnt like twilight. razz
But thanks for your comments, Im glad you like my work. - Report As Spam
- PetitEspoir - 01/09/2009
- shut up, it doesn't suck you narrow minded person! Don't worry, it's awesome, oh wow, I've commented on one of your other poems too Xx
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- iluvpolkadots - 12/03/2008
- Gee, thanks ^_^
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- MezzoMesiah - 11/27/2008
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Comment #1
Your poem sucks!
1/5 - Report As Spam
- iluvpolkadots - 11/25/2008
- Leave me some comments!!
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