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As the rosebuds fall on this dark sullen day
And so shall my love die for you
And as the sovereign beauty of life passes away
We shall hold these words, forever shall they be true
This morose, sullen sound that echos through the ears
A last dying song of what we held through
a memory that races through all of our years
We fall with our past, in which we can never undo
We look upon this world, seconds before escape
Fighting to mend the hearts that have been slain
But when we look towards our loves, the lives that we have shaped
We realize that we shall never die in vain
And so the blissful springtime, with 1000 acres of life
Shall be struck down into the cold peaceful rain
and though This death do us part, as we dim the lights
We can only hope that love will numb the pain...
- Title: Death of a love
- Artist: mosier
- Description: Ill just leave this here.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: death love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- fatmasterson - 12/11/2008
- I wish love had numbed the pain of reading this poem. I use the word "poem" EXTREMELY loosely. 1/5
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- YuMmY_CoOkieXP - 12/11/2008
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sad... i like it
but the first and third and the secind and last rhyme
i dont like dat - Report As Spam
- beautyskater13 - 12/10/2008
- Wow; that is deep!
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- XXxsexyXemoXpuppyxXX - 12/04/2008
- wow...thats really amazing!its deep. i love it so 5/5....
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- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 12/04/2008
- i luv it! it was deep but not to deep that it was all sappy! but yea it really caught me off gaurd! luv it so u get 5/5 from me!
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- mosier - 11/30/2008
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Heh, I didnt expect comments this nice biggrin
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- Dwiinkiin Kitsune - 11/30/2008
- ................deep
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