Dieing On the Inside

• Artist: xX_Show_Me_Love_Xx
• Description: Just read and try to figure out why I wrote this....... No bad comments
• Date: 11/27/2008
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On the outside she's crying,
But on the inside she's dieing,
No one understood that girl,
She is the lonelyness in this world,
She talks, but no one will listen,
Now the tears in her eyes start to glisten,
She sits in a corner, all alone,
She wants to get away,
She wants to go home,
When will they see,
That she is so lonely,
When will they care,
She's dieing on the inside,
But no one is there

Comments

[Lola_Bunny8696]

when i read this i think of myself this is a poem about me right?...

[Found My Lost Love]

I love it Randy.
Another brilliant poem.
<3

[Poetic_Indulgence]

I like it. ^w^ Your feelings in this poem are realistic, that's what makes it so good. It's not overly dramatic, not to over emotinal (or emo as people know it) it's just, simple. And I really like it, good job hun. ^w^