Who Am I

• Artist: High-Fly17
• Description: this is how ive felt most of my life-if you pay attention you will notice there is one thing that dosnt get repeated in the second half of the poem
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: above love friends soul birth

was i meant to be given birth
what do i have to live for
who am i but a lonly soul
what do i have to look foward for
do i belong hear on this earth

i have no friends
i have no love
what else is there in this cold life
i am not like a dove
whose grace never ends

i now have friends
that are granted from above
but still i fell that im in a cold life
i know what lies above
and my desire to go there has no ends

i was meant to be given birth
and now i have a lot to live for
but i am still a lonly soul
and i have a lot to look foward for
but i still havent found my place on this earth

Comments

[Lanna-Bearz]

Wonderful. You have found yourself a bit more. I know what it feels like. Well done!

[Shurtugal_Hinata_Hana]

You have now ^^

[kiba_akira]

man that was great,your wwritnigs alot better than mine

[nintendo24ds]

hey, im srry . i didnt get off. i had to go, so i couldnt tell u yes i did read the bottom. and its the i was and was i part

[Ms Make Me Smile]

its great well done 5/5

[FormerlyKitaTataki]

So sorry u havn't found love yet. I'm giving this a 5

[im his underdog]

this is really good