erii the great

• Artist: the dark vampelf
• Description: this is a poem i made i have better ones that i will add later but this is my best one on this computer
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: erii great

the average person can't kill an army
the average person cant be immortal
the average person cant give up trying until he has tried

when u hurt me once ill ignore it
when u hurt me twice ill forgive u
whenu hurt me three times u will die

if u can get revenge easily then u are feared
if u are afraid to get revenge u are a wimp
if revenge can solve your plrblems then u are great

if u think i wont try then u havent seen me give up
if u have seen my anger then it wasnt towards you
if u have seen my revenge then u wouldnt want to try me

these will be the last words you here if u hate me
these will be the words that u fear if u dont know me
these will be the words that u know by heart if u love me

for i am known as erii the great
i feel no pain
i see no hate
i need no love

Comments

[Tsuki Kurai]

I'm not going to beat around the bush, you have problems. Verse three really points it out, saying that revenge is a good thing. No, revenge solves nothing, and accomplishes nothing. All it does is create bad feelings, and that goes against the purpose of life, that is, happiness. Revenge is not a thing that fate decrees.

[Blue GiGi]

wow eri chan this is really depressing, even for me......O.o???

[the dark vampelf]

lol thanx i have some better ones and some more emo ones but u know i was thinking back to the days when i didnt care bout much and i was starting to become like that again then to cuzz somone realy pissed me off

[Scarlet Wrath]

Nice, i'm guessing this is in a self proclaimed standard. Bold and sweet.