random thoughts...

• Artist: x_Nuzz
• Description: look at the title.
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: random thoughts

Today the sky was black in the middle of the day,
and the sun was waning to a sliver.
it looked like the purple cat's smile.
it made me remember I was insane.

at night, I lay in my bed
staring at the celling,
looking for faces in the white plaster..
and maybe think of that black sky...
in the middle of the day..


(there was a middle verse. I took it out..)

Comments

[La Petite Mofette]

I think it would be a good short poem if you removed the middle verses, but I love the line "looking for faces in the white plaster.." remember a poem doesn't have to be long to be good.