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when u look at the sky
and i see your eye
u look like u whan to die burning_eyes
and i will never know why
- by iiBeKeirstin |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: my love
- Artist: iiBeKeirstin
- Description: i love it and made it at school
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: love
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- Kimono325 - 12/03/2008
- It's... decent. Not great... not terrible. The grammar is a tad off though. It's a bit hard to follow. But I like the general idea of it. It seems very nice.
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