Tears from a lie

• Artist: I Are RainBow Pride
• Description: I've had some dissapointments in my life, and ive learned that i cant trust many people anymore...
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: tears from

my tears they fall with pain
like tears conceived from tar
full of agony and war
seen only from afar
tonight these tears are
full of pain but also i can feel
hate from my heart
because the stigma is released
unfaithful and unforgiven
i can not let this be
not this time
so i must be empty and dieing inside
for only my eternity
Will i forever tear from that lie

Comments

[oxygeNATION]

It's a good meaning, and it looks like you are trying to rhyme in the beginning but it seems to loose the feeling towards the end.

[~Shadey Sam~]

I understand, its quite painful. It's a good poem.