Battle with in

• Artist: Damian rane
• Description: another one i made cause was bored... :| (and no this is not true..i did nothen and nothen happend)
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: battle with

I can't stand it
a beast in side is growing in side of me
its in my thoughts taking over
i can hear my heart beat loud and my pauls is cold as ice
my sweat feels like burning acid flowing down me face
all here is "doo it kill him doo it!"
my fist ackes with pain
i feel my jaw can just snap
why me why me?
my body is out of controll
i no longer have a body of my own
I truned in some thing a shadow of death
i finaly get hold of my self
it feels like my heart stopped and i can't breath
blood splats are every where
and its not mine its his
his eyes show no life
his hands are as cold of death
i....killed...him..
what...am..i?

Comments

[fading-flower1256]

hey I like your stuff but im not tryig to let you down or anything but are you a true beliver in Jesus Christ if not and you want to know how you can become one just pm me and ill be more the willing to ok well Jesus loves you smile

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

wow this is very good midnight! =D your rlly good...
comment on why you wrote this... =D l8r buddy!

[Makoto_22]

np^^

[Makoto_22]

very good^^
please keep writing

[Unfound Dreams]

I like it. I think that it shows bravery and wonderment. I think that poems like these cause the world to view things from a different state of mind. Keep writing, because you are really good, and we need poetry like this to fill our musuems.