Don't You See?

• Artist: lil lost angel
• Description: It's a poem i wrote because of someone who hurt me.
• Date: 12/21/2008
• Tags: dont

As your world crashes around you
I will laugh
Nothing gonna change my world
You tried though

Locked me up in dark places
Without the sun...
Love...
Hope.

You locked me up for a long time
Time to think
Time to plot
The day you opened the door was coming

Did you expect it?
Me jumping?
Attacking
You made me the animal

My life was withered away
To one fact
I had to destroy you
Even if that meant destroying myself

And as you die
I will be set free
For you see,
You locked me up.

Comments

[Insanitys Playmate]

Free Verse? I think that's what it is, isn't it? Lol. I can't remember.
Pretty good. I can actually feel the emotions. Hard to find that in poetry now. Brava.

[GodsDarkAngel44]

nice work!! love your poetry.