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Death's Speech
peaceful sleep
peaceful time
until the moment breaks
intruding greed and grief
no more peace
it all erupts
and evil consumes the air
no more quiet
all is shouts
nothing but fear
the skies are filled with blood
torture, screaming
crying, suffering
no more peace upon the lands
no more shelter
no more hope
bodies spread over the sands,
covering what was once beautiful
each one avoiding being struck to the ground
but some fight with courage
the hopeful are soon plunged to their death
where their brotherin's limp bodies lay.
fighting for what they believe to be right
for what they want
bravery, shattered
fear for all to smell,
to sense
horror, of the truthness of their worst desire
the time will come for their death,
they believe this,
to be their fate
each one with a crevice
in their hope
their destiny now clouded
undecided
By: D.I.R
- Title: Deaths Speech
- Artist: RinAkurei
- Description: i wrote this when i was twelve. i luv reading it with feeling...lots of peple say im demented, but if you really think about it there is a true meaning hidden inside, a metephor left to be uncovered.
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: deaths speech
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Comments (3 Comments)
- RinAkurei - 11/14/2010
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Thank you!
lol, i can't say i "enjoyed" writing it though, lol. ^.^
but yes, you guessed right - it's about war... - Report As Spam
- fanguu - 05/24/2009
- It's nice ^^
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- Procer Nex - 01/19/2009
- Hmm...it's a fascinating piece to say the least. I wager it's something involving a view on war, but brutality isn't always the best measure. Consider the melancholy beauty that death carries with it as well. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it thoroughly.
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