somebody save me

• Artist: Ash the child of death
• Description: just something to express how i feel about life....
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: somebody save

i have lost all hope
lost all faith
lost all sense of who i am.
all i need is an answer
for why i'm still here.
it just doesn't make sense,
my existence in this world.
my death would be meaningless
there won't be a tear.
my life is so full
of tears and pain
i can't take it anymore
i must go away.
i've controlled this emotion
for several years
now the pain is too much
for me to bear.
i don't think i belong
in this world at all
the call to death
even stronger then ever.
this state of depression
is an overwhelming force
just beyond the edge
i can hear the shouts.
one foot stays firmly
on the ground
the other one hovering
above the edge.
i need a reason
to keep on living,
to draw me away
from the edge of the cliff.
i'm begging now please
save me from temptation
draw me away from this cliff
and keep me safe forever.

Comments

[ClaireMayB]

Very sad . . . but still beautiful poetry.
~ Reya heart

[Ocean Torent]

You know this reminds me of how I felt a few months ago...Then I found out there were people there to pull me away from the edge..There's someone there for you to.

[RisexWithxthexDead]

Good job... although i think there is someone who needs you, i cant assure it...what i can assure is that someone WILL need you.