never dies never fails

• Artist: mew aira
• Description: please post something i want to know what u think!!!
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: never dies never fails

Love is a difficult think,
it fades and grows at will.
Though it breaks the heart and damages the soul,
even makes life hard to live
It is a joy to feel and a wonder to have.
Love gives a lot of people purpose,
It bends and flows between family and friends
making a day brighten.
Everyone deserves to have, hold, and cherish this feeling....
Even thoughts who have given up. heart

Comments

[Church-Alyxis]

Not a bad poem, but some of the spelling begs the question as to whether or not you are trying to change the pronunciation of the word to have a better iambic pentameter, or just change the flow of the sentence structure to make it closer to an even beat. Nice overall, and a pleasant topic matter.