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Does this world only consist of me and you?
Are there any other faces?
Lately keeping my sanity has been hard to do.
I've fallen into such an oblivous state.
Your voice is the only thing for my ears.
Your taste is the only thing I savour.
So please just stay near.
And I'll record my love on this paper.
I don't regret anything I've said to you.
Anything I've let carress your ears is nothing but the truth.
So let me tell you I love you,
No matter what you do.
And I don't care what they say, they can't stop what's already there.
So please just stay near.
And I'll love you like never before.
But I understand you have to leave short.
Just remember my voice and please come back when it's better.
Keep a mental note of her.
She loves you for you.
And hopes you love her that way too.
- by writervsworld |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Remember My Voice
- Artist: writervsworld
- Description: wrote this about a certain dude....it's actually like the corniest thing i think i've ever written, *blushes* i don't like the way i ended it either. what do u think?
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: remember voice
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Comments (2 Comments)
- TiasRain - 12/31/2008
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I love it. I disagree with yuna, its amazing I relate to it completely, yes its corny, but its also true to life. everyone is a lil corny sometimes
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- Yunas broken heart - 12/31/2008
- Hehe, it's good. Not OMG AMAZING! But it's good. Uh, I see why you don't like the ending, it doesn't really fit. But still it's sweet. Hehe, nice!
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