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Shattered being, shattered lies,
when you said an unending goodbye.
My heart you crushed and stole away;
leaving me in a sunless day.
I try to breath, but only cry,
when all my love was denied.
The hole in my chest brings to much pain,
So this blissful charade I can no longer sustain.
I plunge the knife deep in my chest.
It should hurt, but I’m to depressed
and I feel nothing inside,
For my soul had already died.
I know your love was too good to be true,
So I push the blade deeper, just for you.
My clothes stain crimson; my heart runs dry
I whisper your name, one last time.
- Title: Shattered being
- Artist: zosmaticy
- Description: ...
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: shattered being depressed suicide
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Chelly17 - 08/15/2010
- absolutely terrific! = )
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- iShaaadow - 05/10/2009
- Very, very good. The beats of each measure stayed consistent which helps make the poem a good read. Well, for me at least! 5/5
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- smexy_Naria - 04/11/2009
- its pretty good hey check mine out its a 5
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- vanessa_m - 03/11/2009
- i like it,
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- katoraSun456 - 01/19/2009
- Deep,Scary I love it, It felt like i had a blade in my heart keep it up and please cheak out my poems, Bravo!
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- Twilight_Juliet101 - 01/02/2009
- nice, but it is easyr to have an open poem.
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