Doll

• Artist: Synayo
• Description: I haven't been able to write a poem for a few weeks so.. this is sort of iffy.
  Its kind of about my mixed feelings. Im also feeling kind of useless and unneeded...
  A lot of stuffs happening here & in real, so this might be my last poem because I might just quit.
• Date: 01/07/2009
• Tags: doll mouse robin bear synayo

Feeling empty, alone,
You're a doll,
All those emotions which were together, sewn,
All shattered, so now, you're simply a doll,

Wanting revenge for your heart,
You're a bear,
You'll take your revenge out on anybody for anything, even not feeling smart,
You're so furious, so now, you're a bear,

Hiding away, scared,
You're a mouse,
Worried about anything for which you're unprepared,
Hiding will do you no good, admit it, you're a mouse,

Flying away, free,
You're a robin,
Held by nothing, you're heart is not owned and there's so much to see,
Im jealous of you, for let me explain: You're such a robin

Comments

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

I agree, a bit iffy, but at the same time theres something I really like about it. Maybe it's the accusitory tone... "you're such a robin" I liked that, at least [which is more than can be said for a lot of the crap on this cite].

And some personal advice, whatever your going through, at least know that you'll always have the ability to write. Even though it sometimes goes away [I had writers block once that lasted for almost a year] it will always come back, and when you least expect it.

[PASSOV3R]

i like it =]