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Can you feel the concrete rain
As it falls down and bares our pain.
face streaming in a mixture unborn
A heart not healing and have been torn
The desire of love and a wish incomplete,
feeling of regret and defeat.
Don't you see me?
Or am I meant to be unseen?
I can't breathe here without you
Truthfully I want too..
My tears build my concrete rain
But I wonder if its to late.
- Title: Concrete Rain
- Artist: PLUR13
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- Date: 01/10/2009
- Tags: concrete rain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Acid Frenzy - 03/15/2009
- Terrible. Simply terrible. Poor grammar makes its meaning ambiguous. Poor delivery makes your message sound flat. Poor work makes me question your decision to submit it.
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- xXLady_MorteXx - 01/10/2009
- wow thats deep i`m a little bit choked up
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- The Grace Of Rain - 01/10/2009
- i love this.5/5 plz read my poems/poem and rate&comment^^thnks
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- Sunlight_Maiden456 - 01/10/2009
- i luv it keep up the good work
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