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A smell, a gift, a promise that you broke
now I watch my love for you burn, go up in smoke.
The ash is all thats left, when all is said and done.
May it follow you around and remind you of what you've done.
You said you loved like never before,
But then it was my heart you cut, you ripped, you tore.
I'll never forget the day you turned your back on me,
though I know vengence you will see.
- by Namine-san-su |
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- | Submitted on 01/10/2009 |
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- Title: ash
- Artist: Namine-san-su
- Description: I personally love this poem and yes while reading it I'm aware it kinda sounds like some kinda spell XD i wrote it after my bf of 2 years dumped me so it's kinda vengeful. lol
- Date: 01/10/2009
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- xRockstar 202x - 01/12/2009
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Very nice.
I love poems like these
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- Namine-san-su - 01/11/2009
- lol no don't worry I didn't go psyco on him. just ignored. he tries to get back with me like 4 times lol
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/10/2009
- hmm it does sound like a spell and u actually can feel the hate, very nice job! ^^
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- supergirl10895 - 01/10/2009
- O_o oh...my. I hope you didn't actually harm your bf. I can really feel the hate you put into this poem. Nice work!
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