loved by all

• Artist: llxXcodyXxll
• Description: it was a poem for my girlfreind
• Date: 01/16/2009
• Tags: loved

you love who you have lost and hate that you have lost them
your mother has gone away and your dad has start packing
your life has start crumpling and your world has gone away
but somehow you have the energy to come here today
you know that life should always be fun
and that's why your the one who has become
the only real person that everyone loves!!

Comments

[N a n e e - N o o n a]

umm...optimistic? 8D

[randomjoe]

Like in your other poems, you should work on the grammar here, but it has potential. 3/5