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Forcing you to pass those hospital doors
to talk to people who can't remember why you're in there for
and they cross their legs and say they know what you been through, how you suffered
and tell you hollowingly that you can succeed, so many others had it rougher
But what does that do if you're unsure about your fate
and time ticks away closer to your deathdate
and what does it even mean, to "succeed"?
what is the PURE HUMAN dream?
What if you feel you're going down the wrong path
walkking aimlessly to the dream destroying wrath
You can't decide on how to spend your life
and your only given the same advice
"do what you want, it's up to you"
but you don't even know what to ******** choose!
Maybe a little more than just being told to succeed
as what this lost person needs
maybe a little direction and sincere affection
can give more dimension
for you
- Title: For "You"
- Artist: ABluejay
- Description: Advice trying to help a lost soul? I know this is what i needed
- Date: 01/29/2009
- Tags: sincere
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Girouette - 03/11/2009
- again remember rhyme scheme shouldn't take priority, the subject is a nice and unique one though
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- Starlight_Miss - 01/29/2009
- It's good. Try checking your grammar, but it's good. 4/5. Please rate back.
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