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the many things we need to be to help the earth to find the key
is loving all and hating none to never kill with laughing gun
to spread the joy and stain the heart
with love and peace not trash dont start
the goddess spreads the peace to all
her magic makes you stand not fall
and though the others may sin and lie
they'll never laugh cuz hearts will die
- by Ranai Shadow Dancer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/30/2009 |
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- lemonpop - 02/03/2009
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i enjoyed the steady flow, props because that's hard to mantain sometimes. two comments, one: if you took the time to write such a lovely peice, spell out the words please; two: i would look at the part with "not trash don't start" it's a bit akward and i'm sure that i quite understand what you mean there.
I really liked this :3 exlellent work *claps* - Report As Spam
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