Caution

• Artist: iBrightScales
• Description: Well, there isn't much to say about this poem. I just wrote it, and that's about it.
  Tell me what you think!
  <3
• Date: 01/31/2009
• Tags: caution

Be still, my darling.
Movements fly like demons tonight.
Rushing in and out with the wind,
gathering speed with pain.
Cutting away at flesh and bone;
Tearing into minds so recluse.
Wrenching out the solemn thoughts
Of arch angels meant for better times.

Let’s keep our voices low tonight.
Those tremors like wake-up calls
Bringing forth such monstrous thoughts;
Only to hold words like knives.
Cold blood is now wearing thin
It’s hanging on the tongues of sparrows
Soaking the earth in true remorse
Only to steal the very life from the dust.

Comments

[Mecca Against Reality]

I agree wholeheartedly with the person below. This poem is one of your best yet, and it is now a favorite.

Now bish, you better start to write more, or I'll get angry and our tea party will be canceled because of my being thrown into depression: right where you want me. <3

[Kimono325]

Now this, this is truly amazing. I really love this idea, the imagery is astounding, and your vocabulary is something to be envied. I do love this, it deserves nothing less than five stars. Excellent writing. Excellent.