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It falls down my cheek
Slowly
Silently
A pearl of perfect silver
It escapes my walls
Of defense
And pours down
Once one falls
More must fall
I wish there was someone
To stop my tears
To comfort me
To tell me it’s going to be okay
So no more tears will fall
- by Niamh_of_Sevenwaters |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: Tears
- Artist: Niamh_of_Sevenwaters
- Description: i wrote this poem when i was having a really bad day...and it made it seem better..please rate and comment
- Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: tears
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Comments (3 Comments)
- roboslacker - 05/13/2009
- I think you don't need "Of defense" but otherwise pretty great.
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- ObsessiveSiriusFanGirl - 05/03/2009
- aww this captures loneliness so perfectly. Good that it made you feel better=]
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- hellobeautiful793 - 02/02/2009
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we all wish there was that someone for us
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