To Let This Dream Die

• Artist: tattoo_lizard91
• Description: I wrote this about an old friend of mine....
• Date: 02/04/2009
• Tags: dream love

I want to tell you how I feel,
But I cant remember how to speak.
I wish that you could see me,
But you will never know the way my heart bleeds.

The last time I waved you didn't react,
You don't react to anything anymore.
It looks as though you've closed my only remaining door.

I should let it go, I no longer have a chance,
I think I should tell you, I still cry over your face,
But your heart is taken, and in it I no longer have a place.

I'm trying my hardest, to leave you as a memory of the past,
I tell myself that you are/were, just a crush,
and then you turn that corner and my soul shoots up in a rush.

I want to hold you, feel you....love you,
I wish you knew that you are the one i want...no need,
But I am to much a coward that I cannot tell you.

It cuts me so deeply, with each tear you make me cry
And I realize, that I need to let you go,
I have to let my dream die.

Comments

[Atheshya]

The first stanza has four lines, but all of the rest have three. Also, using slashes as in "I tell myself that you are/were, just a crush," is really informal and breaks the flow of thing, as does ellipses in the lines "I want to hold you, feel you....love you, / I wish you knew that you are the one i want...no need,".

[XxThe_TiNmAnxX]

OMG lizzy your so emo lol
its really good

[5_Demonic Angel_5]

it must have taken a lot to write this =]
really from within you 'deep feelings'
its great xd