love and snow

• Artist: joy1579
• Description: the first 2 lines came to me while i was doing dishes then it just went from there hope you L.O.V.E. love it
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: love snow

align=center][bLlove and Snow
Heart brakes come and they go
Not unlike the snow
Each is different each can show
The pain that just seem's to grow
As the day's come and go
When it's time for the snow to go
It melts and lets the water flow
And when the heart break finaly goes
It leaves and lets new love flow.
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Comments

[_Fantasy_Mirage_]

The poem flows, and everyone can relate.
5/5

[x_anti angel_x]

i think theres a little too much "o" rhyming. its kinda overkill and in my humble opinion gets in the way of receiving the whole poem.