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that girl,
she's always the one to pick on,
she's always the one to shout names,
because we want her to cry,
but when she goes home she cries,
because she thinks it's her fault,
because she thinks she isn't good enough,
but she's strong,
she goes to us and say's: you can say whatever you want, but i know, inside you feel lonley, because you self are alone, you want to pull someone else down, with the hope you'll feel better, but you still feel broken...
that girl,
that girl we always pick on,
i'll never do that again,
because i respect her,
after what she said,
because, that girl is strong....
- by iKaguya Houraisan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/16/2009 |
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- Title: that girl...
- Artist: iKaguya Houraisan
- Description: this is something that was in my mind a long time, i hope someone reads it and understands it.... plus i made it from my head, and i'm only 14 so i still have a lot to learn....pleas comment, so my next one will be better...and if i spelled thing wrong, remeber i'm dutch so and i'm no good in grammer..
- Date: 02/16/2009
- Tags: girl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Rawhrz - 12/13/2009
- Choppy... relatable. 4/5
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- Zeonku - 02/21/2009
- your most likely that girl and you act like your good looking on gaia
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- DDrox316 - 02/17/2009
- omg i love it! heart
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- CalicoCal - 02/16/2009
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I like the idea of it, and there are a few spelling mistakes but I dont judge that razz
I'd say it's just a little choppy. Other than that it's good (: - Report As Spam