~untitled~

• Artist: adieu000
• Description: i'm new at writing poetry...so here it goes..
• Date: 02/18/2009
• Tags: untitled

mirrors.
why can't they show something good?
we may look good on the outside
when primping and curling,
but what they do is homocide.

they show messages to you soul,
telling you what to fix...
they show reflections of things only you can see.

can you look in one when you're mad?
can you look in one when you're sad?
no. i thought not.

you can't because,
because they don't lie to you.
lie to you like the people around you easily can.

they have the right words to say every time.
but why is it homocide you ask?
because it shows you what you are too ashamed to see. . .

2/17/09

Comments

[mini_kitty14]

i like the honesty init and i can relate but the question at the end does kinda give the poem a moot point. 4/5

[Never The End]

This is okay.
With the last to phrases at the end, you need to change I think. Asking a question in that way and then to answering it kinda kills it a bit. I am just saying. Sorry to offend you if I did. Just being honest.

[Felidae89]

wow, does that hit home...