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A wounded warrior gives up his wish to show his worth,
He has always relied on only the necessities of time.
He places his sword in his horde never to be used and hit the ground with a chime.
He now stays with is parents, hoping for rebirth.
- by Brackmonster |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: The Wounded Warrior
- Artist: Brackmonster
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Description:
I poem that I wrote Creative Writing Class. I dont think it's bad, but I'll let you decide.
This poem is about a warrior who was strong once, but isn't anymore... - Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: wounded warrior sarrow hopeless
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- julz786 - 02/27/2009
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i think its ok
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- scitama - 02/25/2009
- Really liked the descriptions of the warrior, and hitting the ground with a chime sounds really cool. Staying at home with his parents sounded funny, but I still really liked this poem biggrin
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