Addressed to the One I Love

• Artist: Lost the Grasp of Life
• Description: Love poem I wrote...
• Date: 03/01/2009
• Tags: addressed love

I stand by, just waiting,
Waiting for that chance to make you mine
And as I sit and watch you fall in love, I am dying inside
Many chances come and go, and I am still waiting,
Waiting for that special time, that I can finally find my courage and approach you with my question
The time finally comes and I go up to you
But as I speak, I stutter and choke
And everyone is watching, I feel like an idiot,
It's like a bad joke
Who knew saying six words would be so difficult:
Will You...
Go Out...
With Me?

Comments

[WorIds]

i enjoy it it shows a side of the guy's mind usually not seen 5/5

[sexycindy67]

I never knew it was THIS hard for a guy to ask a girl out. I gave it 5 stars.

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

lol well it's better than having boys say "what would you say if I asked you out?" lol i love it

[teenagemutantninjatoni]

this is how i feel sometimes! Very well written!