He Said...

• Artist: Shadow_Fox1392
• Description: A poem I wrote when I caught my boyfriend cheating on me. AGAIN. I was stupid enough to let it slip the first time. I was a lot younger, then. Like... Thirteen or fourteen. I'll be seventeen in July. Anyways, I know it's a rather stupid/bad poem, but comments are welcome. Please vote ^_^
• Date: 03/02/2009
• Tags: said

He said he wanted a second chance
I was stupid to believe
He said he wanted to slow dance
I've never felt so decieved
He said he loved me
And I thought he did
But look where it got me
He said I was pretty, but God forbid...
I walked a path I knew I shouldn't
But did anyway, just for him
And love again? I probably couldn't
I didn't know what to say
Head clouded
So hard to see
Mind crowded
The one he loved just wasn't me
I wish I couldn't have heard
The sound of my heart breaking
It sounds absurd
But I started shaking
Sometimes I wish
I had never fallen in love
Because it always slips away
Like a silk glove
Sometimes I don't know
What I should do
And will I love again?
That's up to you

Comments

[Skweetlez]

I like the begining, its got good potential ^^

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

I LOVE IT!.

[Saint Sims]

I'm not a big fan of rhyming, I feel it is overused by to-be poets THOUGH if done correctly if ends up quite nice. This one is the cleche loves story though, it is very nice.

[Renata Of the Volturi]

It has REALLY good rhyming I love it! Thanks for commenting on my Poem called "I'll be there..."