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I loved you...........
I thought you loved me too.
But I was wrong
Oh no no I can't be strong
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I was on t.v crying
You were at home trying
To pretend to love me
You are a bee you stung me
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Right behind my back you cheated
In a book you were reading
How to be sneaky
Your really just so cheeky
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You so were unfaithful
I am so dead inside right now
(SLITS THROAT)
- by SenorTisha |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: I Loved You Poem/Song
- Artist: SenorTisha
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- Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: cheatedunfaithfulemo
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Purin-chii - 09/14/2009
- I agree with the comment below.
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- Lost Music Note - 09/14/2009
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Hmm... well, it's definitely too-the-point. Not very profound, and it looks like you tried a little bit too hard to rhyme the words... it doesn't really flow well, like poetry, either. And the "(SLITS THROAT)" at the end made it worse. =l
Sorry But only 2/5. - Report As Spam
- XxCookieRawrzxX - 09/04/2009
- Deep 5/5
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