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THE FIRST SNOW
by Just_Fn_Crazy
That first snow
leaves the forest
a virgin void
of any tracks
like that new
bathroom wall
before the vandal
scrawled
“I was here.”
But there is
in every animal
a bit of the barbarianl
for later the rabbit
writes he too was here
just as the deer
proudly proclaims
“Just passing through,”
and what’s that?
A timber wolf track
amongst the others;
the entire saga
of Nature thus
revealed.
- Title: FIRST SNOW
- Artist: UC Poika
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Description:
That first snow after a long spell.
- Date: 03/14/2009
- Tags: first snow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Jerryboam - 03/24/2009
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Nice clean blueprint nature
like your ability as a wordsmith - Report As Spam
- Faded Dreams5 - 03/15/2009
- Very good. I liked the imagery and especially the similes and metaphors
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