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march on soldier boy
march through the mud mixed with blood
march with that gun in your hand shooting aimlessly
your comrads fall around you but you dont feel the pain you've gone numb
march on soldier boy
told that that the fighting is for peace but the fighting will not end
peace will never come
your stuck fighting an endless war while your family moves on without you
march on with your dead eyes march over the bodies and move in place
you thought you were fighting terrorists but you've killed more boys than men
soldier boy your already dead the thoughts have left your head
you were told you would never be forgotten but everyone has
even as they stick you in that box you have been replaced
by a brighteyed-boy who thinks he'll bring peace to the world with the fire of a gun
the cycle continues, march on soldier boy.
- by o_O-Hawkeye-o_O |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/26/2009 |
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- Title: March on Soldier boy
- Artist: o_O-Hawkeye-o_O
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Description:
A poemI wrote while watching CNN. This poem has nothing to do with that song! D:<
also it's anti-war not anti-american. please comment! - Date: 03/26/2009
- Tags: march soldier
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Queen4aDAG1910 - 07/07/2009
- Well, I like it. Even though my schoolmates say that my poetry should be burnt, I think your poem is pretty good.
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- Radkal - 04/02/2009
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2/5
-Grammar issues
-Lack of imagery, metaphor, etc.
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You've got some chops, but you really need to work on your form/delivery. I loved the message, though. I'm a few weeks away from getting shipped to boot myself. - Report As Spam