Falling

• Artist: KingAbukura
• Description: well truthfuly I can't realy think of a description..
• Date: 04/01/2009
• Tags: falling

A promise I made to her
“I’ll always be there for you”
I clearly hear
Echoing in my head everyday
And everyday she pushes me farther and farther away
I see her hide it
Her tears and her screams
Silently hurting
I offer my hand
Asking “what’s wrong?”
And every time
I try to catch her
She pushes me down and walks away
But I have no one to catch me
No one to see my pain
No one to say a word to me
Not even as simple is “Hi”
But what happens when I fall?
Will someone catch me,
Or will I just keep falling,
Never to be caught
“I’ll always be there for you”
I clearly hear
Echoing in my head
It doesn’t matter anymore
I’m falling while she is high up
Soaring above the clouds
And I’m happy.

Comments

[Controlled Vampiress13]

Wow that is really good it sort of reminds of mine

[zephrol]

this is a great poem 5/5...and the person that said "poor" must not judge poetry alot.

[joe_mora]

Wow, that's deep.

[KingAbukura]

never said it was a poem, i just jot things down as they come into my head. and as to see if i'm making any improvments with my thoughts i post em up here and poetry and lyics are the closest thing for it.

[Edell Frenetica]

poor.. just words put together in short lines below one another without punctuation does not make a poem.

[CrowleysGirl]

wow tht was rly good! its like awwwww! good job