a poem about a polar bear

• Artist: akitakita1327
• Description: plz comment and vote on what u think of my poem...thx
• Date: 04/02/2009
• Tags: poem about polar bear

You swim for miles in icy waters
You once were the rulers' of the ice
We have taken it all away from you though
You try to find solid ground while we melt it all
You are dieing all cause of us
We are the fault of your destruction
We are killers
We even pollute your hunting waters and kill your prey
We don’t realize the pain we cause you
Our chemicals kill your water
And we poison you so
Many don’t care about you
They think your nothing but a low animal
But you are more than that
You are powerful, and brave
We are the ones who can’t see your potential
We are blinded by all of our mistakes
We are the destroyers of the mother Earth
I speak of the absent minded people when I say this
We are very sorry and please forgive us for everything

Comments

[GAlA Site Assistant 60]

awwww

[NakedJack]

The writing is poor, but at least you are trying to say something. Its not a pointless bs piece.

[Lone-Xaven]

Hey, it is really nice, i really liked it, my favorite animals are Wolf as number one, then Polar Bears as number 2, my friends says im a bear myself heh, oh well, its really good to know you took the time out to talk about my kind ^_^ thanks razz

[Angiebug988]

This is the awesomest damn thing ever!