Deadly Sins: Greed

• Artist: within love
• Description: Another sin poem. Please comment and vote, thank you!
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: deadly sins greed

A sin that's always there.
Sitting on your shoulder.
Whispering that you should
have everything you desire.

Making you take
what you want.
You care not who you hurt.
As long as you obtain
what you want.

I see this sin everyday.
Even I'm tempted by
this deadly sin.
It is hard to escape it.

She stares you in eyes,
she tells you to that you can have everything.
We believe this sometimes,
other times not.

Her name is Greed.
She is a deadly sin.
One that is always present.
We have all been her victim
at one point or another.

Comments

[Kind Reyuna]

Good poem. Keep up the good work! ^^

[NakedJack]

I feel immune to greed razz If you say I'm lying, then ******** you. The only time I get greedy is with my cigs. I made around 200 dollars a week and I'd blow it on stuff for my family most of the time. I wish I didn't! It would be nice to have some money now. I even spent 600 dollars for Christmas on my younger brother. 60 for someone online ^_^ Material goods are pointless boring things.

[jasmintee]

I think the way you arranged the lines and paragraphs makes it really hard to read.

[superaku]

That is the truth...no one as far as I know is immune to greed. Hey if you don't mind please check out my poem its called Pandora's Love. Thank you and your poem gets a 5/5!!!

[Tseko the Living Shadow]

*insert approving/understanding comment here*