In The Dark Of The Night

• Artist: Brittany_mike
• Description: This is a poem I wrote last week I was depressed. No I am not emo
• Date: 04/19/2009
• Tags: dark night

Dark as black,
Nowhere to run nowhere to hide,
All I see is my blood,
Evil, Evil, Evil,
EVERYWHERE,

My Blood runs cold,
Pain and agony is all I fell,
Doesn't any one see me,
Lost in the dark of the night,

Then CAME SUNSHINE!!!
Oh how the light burns,
Like acid on my skin
My blood boils so,
No one to save me,

Evil, Evil, Evil EVERYWHERE,
No one sees me,
My Blood runs cold,
I am dark as night.

Comments

[Garzem]

i give it a 5-when i read this i pictured a teenage girl with blood running down her face in a dark ally

[Brittany_mike]

Thanks

[lizardman9]

holy s**t thats dark but yet awsome 5/5

[Brittany_mike]

wow now that I read it the fouth stanza is very dark

[Brittany_mike]

thanks the original is better I couldn't remember the rest of wha I put. I got most of it though smile

[CocoaCommy]

very nice