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Through the Darkness of the seas
I wish to see your face
The rain falls like an acid force
In this Dreadful place
I dream of you every night
Through and through again
I see the image you gave to me
Because the pain will never end
- Title: The Darkness of the Seas
- Artist: pickyzel
- Description: My most favorite poem i have ever written and would love to share with you.
- Date: 05/25/2009
- Tags: darkness seas
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Mugentsuki - 05/26/2009
- Ugh. I am sick of reading these super-short poems. You have a very good start, but add to it. 4/5 because it isn't enough, but with more added, keeping it as good as it is now, you'll get a five from me.
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