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My brother…
Kind, sweet, calm…
There when I need him…
There when I don’t…
My brother…
Someone I can’t live without…
If he were to go...
And never talk to me again...
I don't know what I'd do...
- by Evanescence_Sasuke-luver |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/28/2009 |
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- Title: My brother
- Artist: Evanescence_Sasuke-luver
- Description: about my gaia brother The real Zak great
- Date: 05/28/2009
- Tags: brother
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Comments (6 Comments)
- TheCakelsaIie - 06/01/2009
- Same with me.
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- Evanescence_Sasuke-luver - 05/31/2009
- ... ill have to agree with this... since my two previous poems were way better... i think ill make this one again... stare *not happy now*
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 05/30/2009
- You are a fascist censorship hound. The poem was awful, and bland. It had almost no creativity, the word use was boring the imagery was nonexistent, and I dare say this almost doesn't even qualify as poetry. Good on you for having someone to care for, but this level of closed mind is dangerous for logical thought.
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- Evanescence_Sasuke-luver - 05/30/2009
- i have already deleted some comments... say anything bad bout me, my gaia bro... or the poem and it will be deleted... twisted so i'd watch what i say if i were u...
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- ambereen08 - 05/28/2009
- niceeVOTE 4 ambereen08's POEM OR leave a comment plz!
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