Thoughts of the Moon

• Artist: Nomine983
• Description: Just a short poem I wrote. I hope you like it and if you do I have a ton more others. :]
• Date: 06/02/2009
• Tags: thoughts moon

Time is waisted
By these countless thoughts of the moon.
Redemption forged;
Etched beyond the forrest and walkways
Pulsing infront of two crowds.
Twigs cloud my hair on this path,
Scolding scratches,
For waisting my life
Thinking of the moon.

Comments

[lil shawty shaddy]

wat a great great great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@$%%%%%%%%%%%%%%&&&&&&&&&&&&*(())^%^$#^

[Nomine983]

exactly! your good :] lol basically the moon represents a boy i used to like, you know you get all caught up in liking someone when your young but you dont really realize that its not as much of a big deal as it seams, ya know?

[Dangerous Sweet]

I think i get it. You focus on what you think you want but you dont pay attention to what is going on around you that can make your life better.