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Moving on threw life,
Ive always thought of u as my wife,
Even tho i threatend u with a knife,
You al ways came back,
I cant belive you remember my favorite snack,
Even tho i lack,
Money and power,
I still know your every desier,
I even know your afraid of michle myer,
I may even know your car is missing a tier,
You know longer have any piano wire,
To play me like a guitar,
That day i met u at the bar,
You told me u werent a lier,
Ill always love u samoen,
Just like i your diary........
- Title: Life
- Artist: abab9000
- Description: This is a very small poem my worst yet >.> o and i know i suck at spelling but still dont judge me plz <.< this is from the heart comment please.
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: life
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- Lady Mercury Night - 06/10/2009
- This is actually really good, until the last few lines. Fix the spelling and fix it from after the piano wire line and it will be a 5/5. right now its 4/5 for the mistakes. I really like it though. ^_^
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