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Decomposing Whispers
and evaporated echos
washed through the wind
tingling through gossiping trees,
You are near,
where are you?
Where have you gone?
Come and hold me,
I savor hearing you
-- this soul savors the air
--- this heart savors its ravenous, rage and weathered sorrow
---this body savors the place it saves only for you, as it feels you even now
--- this logic is impatient and wary as it claims to know the truth of lies...
You are near
where are you..
Show me what couldn't have happened
not you.. not us... not this life please no,
don't happen.
send me to the drowning slumber of your chilled arms
before this night dissipates and
the light from the skies lunar luminescent ends.
In astral flight let's take a walk on the fantasies of our hearts
with the sound of souls breathing
we exhale and inhale and
within the exhale, we release all that we are,
were or would ever be
as within the inhale anew existence is created.
The sweetly felt kiss
the sound and taste of souls breathing, laughing
hm-haha
Please, just please
let us stay in the skies and skidded cotton let us stay cosmic,
and in the blossom of midnight let's dance till we're to silly to stand
and to serene to move..
You are near,
where are you?
Where have you gone?
Come and hold me,
I have heard you!
Decomposing Whispers
and evaporated echos
washed through the wind
tingling through gossiping trees,
and beneath and within me i feel
where you once were, warmth and joyful
playful little laughter...
I have heard you!
now where are you?
I know your near....
Come back to me !
And hold me?
with your..
Decomposing Whispers
and evaporated echos
- Title: Your Evaporated Echos
- Artist: Arayza
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Description:
"Decomposing Whispers
and evaporated echos
washed through the wind
tingling through gossiping trees,
"
was done for a contest on a different site, they want a long poem on the night and painful love
interpret as you wish, i am open to any criticism - Date: 06/13/2009
- Tags: love loss eternity night moon
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Comments (1 Comments)
- faux_fur_rabbit - 06/13/2009
- I think it's cool, actually. Well, the part I read. I read most of it, then I started getting sleepy cause it's so late. So, ya, what I read was cool. 4/5.
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