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Live for the moment, don't let anyone tell you otherwise,
Do what you want to, don't answer when somebody asks you why.
View each day like it's your last,
Don't ever let life pass you by too fast.
Hold your girl and take care of her,
Let her know you'll love her always and forever.
Take your time to realize everything's important,
Don't live with regret, and never say, "Um, I can't."
You can do anything you set your mind too,
You just gotta believe in yourself and always stay true.
At one point I viewed my life as passable,
Now I hold my love whenever its possible.
Think about what you do before you act,
Don't say the wrong thing it'll leave a huge impact.
EVERYONE'S important in our tiny little lives,
In the end, don't regret, you survived your bumpy ride
- by Widowmaker098 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/14/2009 |
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- Title: Live
- Artist: Widowmaker098
- Description: a poem of advice, if you like my poems check out the rest on my profile in my journal. rate and comment
- Date: 06/14/2009
- Tags: livepoemswidowmaker098
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ZOMG_ALAN2 - 06/15/2009
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my dad told me that he is a martail art
he is in jiu_jiustu - Report As Spam
- Arkelle - 06/15/2009
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^^ I love to read inspirational poems like this!
It seems only depressing poems are on gaia these days, so I love the change.
I Think you have great potential, but maybe some small adjustments could be made?
I would shorten some of the lines so the poem flows better.
but thats just an opinion.
Still, very good! 5/5 - Report As Spam