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[INTRO]
[VERSE 1] - Slow, Soft
My soul is flyin',
Over my head...
My heart is racin'
Faster than light...
[VERSE 2]
My eyes are cryin'
Tears of blood...
My finger tips
Cold and numb...
[VERSE 3]
I sew the pieces
Of my shattered heart
As you laugh at my splattered blood
But now I'm done
[CHORUS] - First six words soft and slow then Loud and Angry
Cuz all I ever did was Love you
And need you,
And protect you,
And Care
I Listened
And Helped
Yet you ripped it out
With your bare hands (< *Soften*)
[VERSE 4]
You sit on the bed
With eyes dark and cold
While my body lay
Across the floor
[VERSE 5]
My wounds are bleeding
My eyes are crying
And my voice has left
From all the yellin'...
[VERSE 6]
I can't find the words
To say-ay-ay
That I can't be here
No more...
[VERSE 7]
I pack my bags
And leave a letter
Sayin goodbye
And that I'm done
[CHORUS]
Cuz all I ever did was Love you
And need you,
And protect you,
And Care
I Listened
And Helped
Yet you ripped it out
With your bare hands (< *Soften*)
[OUTRO]
- by xXRawr-GirrXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/14/2009 |
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- Title: Ripped It Out
- Artist: xXRawr-GirrXx
- Description: Okay, so my best friend and I have been practicing songs and have been doing pretty good. And she REALLY wants to start a band, but we're not ready for that yet... But I decided to go ahead and write a song (It was out of boredom mostly). So, I wrote it out kinda and now I'm putting it in here because I know what I like and what she likes but I'm not 100% sure about what everyone else likes so I was thinking that people could read this and critique this and add or take away from it just to help.
- Date: 06/14/2009
- Tags: ripped
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The Grace Of Rain - 06/16/2009
- Put it in fourms :3 And ask for critique. Im too lazy too read right now,lol...
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- xXRawr-GirrXx - 06/14/2009
- I know it's not the best song ever, but I am just trying to let people know that this is what it's about and I think this'll help people critique this song.
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