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- by tymers1234 |
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- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: deep deep love
- Artist: tymers1234
- Description: your so beutiful i can hardly stand it. you make my life amazing when your around. its like this deep filling just can deny it. i dont know why its like a knife piercing through my heart. why cant i reject anymore, its just to hard for me. its deep deep love for youy
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: deep deep love
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- Greeneroo - 06/28/2009
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You wrote the poem in the description box. Work on your spelling and grammar and especially on organizing the poem. No one wants to read a giant, jumbled paragraph. 1/5
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