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falling into a pool of blue
is going under
but can't come up
for air
life
to breath
peaceful here
no one screaming,
no one crying
no one hatting,
no one hitting
no love
no heaven
no hell
just neutral
and just how i like it
blue
beautiful and fragile
i want to stay here forever
in this beauty
this place
where no harm is done
no one suffers
suddenly i feel a sharp pain
than i gasp
all the air is gone
everything starts to blacken
but at the last second a gust of wind fills my lungs,again
and the voices that i think are inside my head
are becoming clearer
less hazy
everything starts to lighten
than i hear her
soft,yet harsh
concerned,angry
it's mother
i gasp and cough some more
slowly i awaken from my deep slumber
eyes fluttering open
that's when i see my mother
feeling like the first time
she looks concerned,terrified of what her only loving daughter has become
a druggie
an abuser
a totally insane depressed stranger
someone is next to her
a nurse?
a doctor?
a hero?
I don't know
and don't care
i want to leave
and start to go
put my head rushes and i fall down
i am confused
and everything goes black,again
wake up in a bed,not mine
a room,that well is not mine either
and an annoying beeping sound
oh great i am at a hospital
two days later i go home
not a word said between my mother and I
i know what she is thinking
"who is this person by me,looks like my daughter,but cannot be?"
I know who this person is
she is a druggie
an abuser
a totally insane depressed stranger,,,,,,
- by Polars_Rox_Your_SoX_X |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/26/2009 |
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- Title: Falliing
- Artist: Polars_Rox_Your_SoX_X
- Description: please comment!!!!!!!!!!
- Date: 06/26/2009
- Tags: falliing
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Valoralin - 07/18/2009
- wow is all i can say to this
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- Lilith Celestine17 - 07/01/2009
- I love the emotion you expressed behind this poem. It showed a different side to life.
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- II Deenox II - 07/01/2009
- omg so long BUT i like it XD
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- Polars_Rox_Your_SoX_X - 06/28/2009
- thank you!
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- XxBrokenAngel22xX - 06/28/2009
- hmm i loved the beginning and i loved how you captured all of the points of views and emotions within the poem, great job!
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