Accidental

• Artist: Failure and Disfunction
• Description: Originally the beginning of a story i was working on so its not much of a poem...
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: accidental

The dark silence was almost more than she could take.
She tried to scream, but no sound formed on her lips.
Her breathing was heavy,
and she felt as if the darkness was compressing her,
making it harder and harder to breathe.
Her head was dipping slowly,
the soothing sleep welcomed her like death welcomes a friend,
Dulling her pain,
Forever.

Comments

[megami 666]

I think that it's AMAZING!!!!!! It would make a fantastic beginning to a story, it would make the readers want to read more.