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I hide myself amist the worry and the sorrow
A pain you claim you can never know.
It courses through my vains as ice;
The only thing keeping me here, my vice.
Though I wish more, this tie must suffice.
It is all I have
For it is a wantinfg and unrequited love
I know it is not a feeling you are void of.
I can sense it when you look away;
perhaps you too can feel as I, you just may
Though I know you could never say.
It would be impossible
Yet can there be any possibility of hope for this?
A love I could never touch, never kiss.
It seems it would cause more pain to confess;
Yet to not to is an all consuming abyss.
the punishment, perfect in excess.
And still I hope
Please! I beg of you!
Some small sign that you knew,
And that you know what's happening between us;
I know you can feel and thus,
I know there is hope for an 'us'.
If only I could just
It is enough for me. Allthough a penence
Simply to be permmited in your presence.
Perhaps you are the only one;
Who can make me come undone,
And who knows how I can feel. the only one.
Please show me how you feel
Eventually it happend. Push came to shove,
Everything burst, and we revealed our love.
It was awkward at first, and yet
It was wonderful, i felt like I was a young cadet;
the tension was gone, I would never forget.
My wandering now stopped
All our time together has been trials and joy
These times have provided a clever decoy.
And at the day's end you show me
When we are sure we're alone I get to see;
Our covert dance around, just to be.
Our passion as hot as the midnight sun
- by AranAvenger |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/28/2009 |
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- Title: Amoris
- Artist: AranAvenger
- Description: A poem translated from a language lost and forgoten. the words are slightly strange because our own language dose not have the capacity to adequatly describe many of the things spoken of here. Especially in the matter of Love.
- Date: 06/28/2009
- Tags: thought love pain fantasy longing
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Comments (4 Comments)
- witty_avery - 07/05/2009
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I liked it a lot :]
I think it's very deep and mature, and it's hard to find good poetry the arenas sometimes -_-
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- AranAvenger - 06/28/2009
- Thank you so much. I wasn't sure if it would sound as good in this language but, thanks!
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- XAlice CullenX-chan - 06/28/2009
- I really like this. It is beautiful the way it shows longing for love and in the end finally getting it. If only we all could be so lucky huh?
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- Revenge of Aran - 06/28/2009
- This is beautiful even though the poem was written for a nother language.
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