friend

• Artist: xXemo_boyXx21
• Description: ummm idk
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: friend

i met u as a stranger

u took me as a friend

i hope we meet in haven were friendship never ends

Comments

[Lilith Celestine17]

I think it was perfect.

[Taste of a Raindrop]

This is a nice poem, but it is full of errors that make it a disaster. I will rewrite your whole poem in a correct form, all right?

I met you as a stranger.
You took me as a friend.
I hope we meet in heaven
Where friendship never ends.

Good work otherwise.