Death's Hold

• Artist: Silaina Fae
• Description: When I wrote this I was thinking of a friends poem (hers is called death song I believe) and no, I'm not a suicidal lunatic like you think I am, and I'm still not a a loon. Well maybe a little bit.
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: death hold escape release cold

Slowly my eyes begin to close
When did it get so cold?
Suddenly I froze
I've come under Death's hold
It's something I'd never thought about
Not even when I dream
But there is no way out
I can't even scream

I fight and I fight
Yet toward me comes a light
I've tried and I've tried
I am so terrified
Why me? Why?
Why is it me that has to die?
It's still so cold.
I will never be released from Death's hold.

Comments

[lautnerrules43]

cool. poetry doesn't work so well always when it rymes, but you made it work! good job!

[Oakyia]

good good great smile

[7Haseo - I AM MARCUS]

I like it my friend nicely done smile

[Missunderstood soul]

it is really good.. smile